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Editor’s Note
It is with a full range of emotions that we present our 2nd Annual Poetry Prize Contest Issue. This is the first issue since Vince O’Connor, our Co-Managing Editor and Webmaster, passed away. We deeply miss his joyful spirit, willingness to tackle any challenge, and dedication to the excellence of RockPaperPoem. Though he wasn’t physically with us, we thought of him throughout the publishing process and are honored to continue the tradition of offering fine poetry to you, our readers.
We hope you will enjoy all 15 beautiful poems—12 Finalists and three Prize winners—in this special edition of RockPaperPoem. Also, please take a few moments to read the wonderful comments from this year’s Contest Judge about the winning poems.
Thank you again for your loyal readership and ongoing support as we begin a new chapter in our journey together.
With warm regards,
The Editors
Comments from Rosemerry Wahtola Trommer, 2025 Contest Judge, about this year’s winning poems:
Grand Prize Winner—”Okay, Okay” by Zoe Boyer
This poem lights me up. I love how the language itself is sensual, surprising—so much music stitched into every stanza. It’s a joy to read out loud. That sensual richness serves this poem, which is, truly, a celebration of how beauty opens us up, even when, perhaps especially when, we think that isn’t possible. I am struck by the simple language in the telling lines—“how easy it would be to lie down,/ let sorrow make a stone of me” and “I have begged the world to stop asking me to stay.” These lay the foundation for the poem, setting up the tension so the reader, too, can be “pierced cleanly through the heart” by “silt red as persimmons, trunks tilting at the banks like the columns of some Roman ruin.” The title is doing such great work here, too, a somewhat reluctant acceptance of the treasure of this life—but by the last lines, the reader and poem’s speaker both are steeped in the gifts of the natural world.
Runner-Up Prize Winner—”ChatGPT Says it Can’t Analyze Why Things Happened the Way They Did” by Meggie Royer
Oh there are so many layers in this poem, the sense that the poem’s speaker is still “looking for things under things.” And so many ways are presented that we might try to understand what has happened—through ChatGPT, through a therapist, by turning over rocks, or even by writing a poem. I love all the unknowns in this poem. And I appreciate, too, all the strange, oddly specific sensory details, such as the taste of rocks from the yard, the brother’s apology that belongs to someone else, and that glorious last image of quiet before the therapist knows the poem’s speaker is present. This poem is a deeply effective blend of what is known and what is unknown—perhaps even unknowable. The simple language is so helpful for a poem interested in exploring the ineffable. There’s a sense of some unspeakable pain that has happened that tugs against the almost tender tone used here. This poem both unsettled and moved me.
Runner-Up Prize Winner—”Feral Camels Unsettled the Land, Tossed Down and Rolled Like Dice” by Sarah Sorensen
The first line of this poem pulled me right in. Immediately I knew I was entering a poem unlike any I have read before. And feral thorn-eating camels become such a profound metaphor for the speaker of the poem: “I know what it means to gorge before sudden bounty and to subsist on pain.” Oh. Oh! It’s so embodied and brings up so much feeling. And then to shift the metaphor so this camel becomes “a golden candy, hard and beautiful in the sun.” Gah! It’s so full of paradox, so wounded, so honoring. I love, too, how the poem begins with such certainty, so factually, and ends somewhat surreal, though still carrying the essence of being factual, even when it ends with a question. Also, the title pulls me in—fills me with curiosity.
Image Credits:
Okay, Okay
Title: Great Smoky Mountains National Park North Carolina and Tennessee
Author: National Park Service
ChatGPT Says It Can’t Analyze…
Title: Pile of Rocks Covered in Green Moss
Author: Pixabay.com
Feral Camels…
Title: Camels Drinking on the Desert
Author: Pexels.com
In the Image Of
Title: Sad Shed in Rain with Birds Flying Composite by Deborah Goschy
Components:
1 Shed
Title: Rustent bølgeblikktak
Author: Øyvind Holmstad
2 Birds
Title: Monochrome Photo of Flock of Flying Birds
Author: Aleksandar Pasaric
3 Rain
Title: Heavy Rain Falling at Night
Author: Rawpixel.com
Collapse/Incline/Eclipse
Title: Baily’s Beads Total Eclipse 2017
Author: NPS (National Park Service) / Jacob W. Frank
Calligraphy with Ants
Curling Ant Trail Across Flagstones Composite by Deborah Goschy
Components:
1 Flagstones
Title: Flagstones
Author: Pixabay
2 Ant Trail
Path created in Adobe Illustrator, paint effects applied in Photoshop
Author: Deborah Goschy
if New Orleans married Manila…
Title: Hanoi – Hàng Bạc Street – 1.jpg
Author: Benjamin Smith, Wikimedia CommonsDuck Hunting
Title: Flock of Pintail Ducks, Anas acuta, In Flight Over Swamp Water
Author: USFWS
Layla was here
Title: Lincoln Elementary School
Author: Kevin Schuchmann
No Extraordinary Measures
Patient’s Hands on Blanket Composite by Deborah Goschy
Components
1 Hands
Title: Person Holding Bible Book
Author: Pickpik.com
2 Blanket
Generative AI image by Deborah Goschy/Adobe Photoshop
Cartography
Title: Person Showing His Hands
Author: Pickpik.com
Daily Lament Accompanied by Rain
Title: Writing the World
Author: Generative AI image by Karen Elias/Freepik.com
Crater Lake
Title: Crater Lake National Park Oregon
Author: Jeffrey Johnson
Like a Fire
Title: The Burning of the Houses of Lords and Commons, 16 October 1834
Author: J.M.W. Turner
South Wind Migration
Title: Rocky Lake at the Middle of Forest
Author: None given